This piece of writting is about a place created by combining two place into one. It has not been finished, but it is a start.
The Luggage conveyor belt, rotates condements and snacks. Folded chairs half filled with viewers lined up to see the picture on the side of a 747. Attendants push down aisle ramming viewers with carts of food, screaming for tickets. The landing tower surveys the audience while shutting down the runway lights, security covers the exits as oxygen masks fall from the ceilings. the screens plays previews as people spread out to enjoy the movie, using parachutes as pillows. As the previews end the no smoking and seatbelt lights flash, and the movie starts.
The Luggage conveyor belt, rotates condements and snacks. Folded chairs half filled with viewers lined up to see the picture on the side of a 747. Attendants push down aisle ramming viewers with carts of food, screaming for tickets. The landing tower surveys the audience while shutting down the runway lights, security covers the exits as oxygen masks fall from the ceilings. the screens plays previews as people spread out to enjoy the movie, using parachutes as pillows. As the previews end the no smoking and seatbelt lights flash, and the movie starts.
posted by Josh at 11:27 AM
2 Comments:
i like how you combined these things and make it actually make sense, very creative..
Spooky and effective! The combination of movement and static-ness is disconcerting. The word "audience" really catches our attention in this context.
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