Here is my current peice for workshop:
I'll Fry
why do people cry
when others have to die
yet some still ponder why
people even try
to understand the angels fly
that they'll never be that high
I admitt that I am not shy
wondering if god is a lie
I'll Fry
why do people cry
when others have to die
yet some still ponder why
people even try
to understand the angels fly
that they'll never be that high
I admitt that I am not shy
wondering if god is a lie
posted by Josh at 10:26 AM
1 Comments:
I liked how you seemed to be able to leave this piece open for whatever the reader wants it to be, while being a little bit humorous about the rhyming.
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